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Post by darkwingdork on Aug 22, 2008 15:53:25 GMT -5
Feel free to share your thoughts about the storyline for the first arc of the comic.
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Post by Temujin on Sept 1, 2008 16:14:53 GMT -5
Looks good so far, though one thing to watch for...don't make them "intentionally female". Its a personal pet peeve that strong women have to have some feme hobbies to make them feminine. Like the line "I hope this doesn't take long, I have to get back to my baking" and "I have to go shopping" its just a personal thing. Ramones girl should hit a concert afterwards
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Post by darkwingdork on Sept 1, 2008 19:09:40 GMT -5
Understandable. When we first started, I asked Brooke to help me out and avoid female stereotyping.
It sort of happened because of my fear that I would end up creating male characters in female bodies. This is the first time I've written a fictional story with women as the main characters, so maybe I'm overcompensating.
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Post by Temujin on Sept 1, 2008 20:57:24 GMT -5
Meh, I'm a male character in a female body. I say its fine to do. We do exist
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Post by darkwingdork on Sept 2, 2008 8:01:57 GMT -5
Meh, I'm a male character in a female body. I say its fine to do. We do exist If that's true, does that mean you're gay for webkilla? Don't worry, the girls are on their A-game for the rest of the arc. No more talk of tea parties and sleep overs, or whatever it is that girls talk about.
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Post by Temujin on Sept 2, 2008 16:54:20 GMT -5
Meh, I'm a male character in a female body. I say its fine to do. We do exist If that's true, does that mean you're gay for webkilla? YES! >.> I mean... what DO normal girls talk about? Someone needs to do some recon work me thinks.
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Post by formaldehyde on Sept 4, 2008 10:38:19 GMT -5
There are some simple things we've avoided such as making them say 'like'. There are times where a guy would normally use the word 'what' instead. For example, there is a scene coming up where Ally says '...what, every day?" whereas, generally, women would use the term 'like'. Not sure why this is... I could be wrong though...
Glad you like it so far, by the way. ;D
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Post by Temujin on Sept 4, 2008 18:25:01 GMT -5
Of course I do ^^ Its really well drawn and the speach is real enough. I know one guy-ish thing I personally do is say "dude". So instead of:
Female:"Like that is so like stupid"
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Male: "What, that's stupid"
I end up:
Temu: "dude, that's effin' lame, man" xD and no I don't smoke pot.
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Post by darkwingdork on Sept 8, 2008 9:34:30 GMT -5
Well okay, we've had enough set-up at this point! Now for the action! The rest of the arc should feature enough violence to keep you all sated.
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Post by Temujin on Sept 8, 2008 9:48:23 GMT -5
Yaaaaaay violenceeeee
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Post by darkwingdork on Sept 9, 2008 9:24:28 GMT -5
I want it to be known, I don't condone violence, unless it gets results...
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Post by Temujin on Sept 9, 2008 18:50:55 GMT -5
amen
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Post by darkwingdork on Sept 10, 2008 10:18:43 GMT -5
If Temu hasn't responded to the latest strip, how do I know she read it?!?!?!
Driving me crazy!
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Post by Temujin on Sept 10, 2008 18:17:53 GMT -5
Lolz, sometimes silence is golden, but really the insurence joke was gold :3
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Post by darkwingdork on Sept 15, 2008 21:02:54 GMT -5
Glad you liked it Temu! We promise more humor that will bring you joy-joy!
How is everyone enjoying the storyline so far?
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