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Post by darkwingdork on Oct 14, 2008 9:58:00 GMT -5
We've got one story arc down. How are you enjoying the characters so far?
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Post by darkwingdork on Jun 11, 2009 9:41:59 GMT -5
You might notice that Sheila's look has changed a little bit since we started. Brooke's trying out a few different things with the characters, like adding some muscle so they don't look like anorexic fashion show models. I must admit, it adds to the quality.
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Kaotix
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Post by Kaotix on Jun 22, 2009 10:00:44 GMT -5
I agree. I like gals to look actually healthy, even the 4 armed anthro variety.
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Post by darkwingdork on Oct 29, 2009 11:38:10 GMT -5
As I mentioned over in the "Deer Witch" plot thread, we get our first glimpse of some inner-team tension between the girls. Ally may have inadvertently revealed a character flaw about herself: she's so sure of her abilities that she thinks she can successfully pull off plans without alerting everyone else to what she intends to do.
It worked this time, but that doesn't mean that something couldn't have gone wrong.
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cubist
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Post by cubist on Oct 29, 2009 17:05:28 GMT -5
Is it really overconfidence that led Ally to keep her friends in the dark? Her plan depended on deceiving the Deer Witch as to the true state of affairs, after all. And since deception is the whole point of Ally's plan, who does Ally reveal the truth to? Shiela? Not hardly -- the 'roo is just too bleedin' direct and honest and forthright. Can Shiela keep up the necessary 'front' so that Ceryn remains blissfully ignorant of the true state of affairs? Well... maybe not... Reece? Little Miss Scatterbrain? As if! Sure, Reece is capable of behaving in a deceptive manner... but the question is, how long can she keep it up before she gets distracted by a shiny thing? Long enough for the girls to reach the target unmolested? Again: Maybe not... Personally, I sympathize with Ally here. I can see why Shiela and Reece would be pissed off, but given the situation, what the heck else could Ally have done, that would have yielded results as good or better than what actually did happen?
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